Saturday, March 6, 2010
week #9 free #2
Friday, March 5, 2010
Week #9 critical 1
- This was my found poem that I wrote in class.
8:21am
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first
how did the paegent go?
8:22am
Rita
great! I won!
I wish you can have been there !
8:22am
i knew you would!!
sweet
congrats!!
i wish i could have too
8:22am
Rita
thanks!
8:22am
maybe when u win next year too i'll be there
lol
so what is this project?
8:23am
Rita
No.... i can only do it once
and Idk... I gotta keep the ball rolling now uuh
I guess i need to go ahead and write a movie
8:27am
yup
i'll help
u just gotta take the first step
8:28am
Rita
what that
So from this I wrote a poem called c=Conversation with God. The encouragement my friend gave me in this chat sounded like something God would say to me. I just changed some sentences around to fit better.
Conversation with God
So you won! I just wanted to say congrats sweetie!
Thanks! I wish you could have see me.
Now you know I didn't miss it. And when you win next year I'll be there too.
No.... I can only do it once.
Says who, don't you know I will make a winner over many things.
Well I guess I have to keep the ball rolling now huh?
Yup, so what is your next project,
Idk, I guess ill write the rest of my life story
Ill help you just have to take the next step.
And what is that....?
Sunday, February 28, 2010
Week #8 critical #3
Nikki-Rosa
Childhood rememberances are
always a drag if you're Black
you always remember things like
living in Woodlawn with no inside toilet
and if you become famous or something
They never talk about how happy
you were to have your mother
all to yourself and how good the
water felt when you got your bath
from one of those
Big tubs that folk in chicago barbeque
in and somehow when you talk
about home
it never gets across how much you
understood their feelings as the
whole family attended meetings
About Hollydale and even though you
remember your biographers never
understand your father's pain as he
sells his stock and another
dream goes
And though your're poor it isn't
poverty that concerns you and
though they fought a lot
it isn't your father's drinking that
makes any difference but only that
Everybody is together and you
and your sister have happy birthdays
and very good Christmasses and I
really hope no white person ever has
cause to write about me
because they never understand
Black love is Black wealth and they'll
probably talk about my hard childhood
and never understand that
all the while I was quite happy