Saturday, February 13, 2010

Rhyming Exercise

This week I wanted to re do the assignment we did in class and find words that rhymes.
I chose the word Precious.

1.* Delicious
2.*Cautious
3.*Luscious
4.* Joyous
5.* Vicious
6. *Jealous
7. * Vivacious
8. Lettuce
9. Dallas
10. Tennis
11. Crisis
12. Thesis
13. porous
14. Status
15. Caucus
16. Chorus
17. Midas
18. Ruckus
19. Notice
20. Menace


Friday, February 12, 2010

(Week 6) #1 free

This is the Pantoum poem I did this week.


Pierced with a suicidal sword,
yet somehow I go on.
Filled with ancestral desires.
I'm tied up in my lover,

Yet somehow I go on.
This is a child's game.
Im tied up in my lover,
the purpose of this will be apparent one day.

This is a child's game
Played sufficiently fierce
The purpose of this will be apparent one day.
As of now the story is occurring.

This is child's game.
Played sufficiently fierce,
The purpose of this will apparent one day.
As of now the story is occurring.

Played sufficiently fierce,
I give off no leads.
As of now the story is occurring.
Deep inside I dream of us,
pierced with a suicidal sword.




Sherita Bolden




Sunday, February 7, 2010

week 5 critical #3

Blank verse


I first I thought blank verse was really easy because it was written in the form that we talk in. There is no rhyming, so you don't have the stress to make words fit. It also is very flexible with meter . But actually in order to write a good blank verse poem have to have some constraints. Or it will just come out sloppy and nothing would separate it from being a poem and and an essay. Its usually written in iambic pentameter. So it even though it doesn't rhyme it should have a beat to it. Since blank verse is easy it it requires you to have creativity. From looking at our packet this week Blank verse is usually long. Shakespeare used a lot of blank verse for his dramatic plays.

My favorite blank verse poem is:



Job Interview


Think you, if Laura had been Petrarch's wife
He would have written sonnets all his life?
DON JUAN, III, 63-4

"Where do you see yourself five years from now?"
the eldest male member (or is "male member"
a redundancy?) of the committee
asked me. "Not here," I thought. A good thing I
speak fluent Fog. I craved that job like some
unappeasable, taunting woman.
What did Byron's friend Hobhouse say after
the wedding? "I felt as if I had buried
a friend." Each day I had that job I felt
the slack leash at my throat and thought what was
its other trick. Better to scorn the job than ask
what I had ever seen in it or think
what pious muck I'd ladled over
the committee. If they believed me, they
deserved me. As luck would have it, the job
lasted me almost but not quite five years.


William Matthews