Friday, March 5, 2010

Week #9 critical 1

  • This was my found poem that I wrote in class.
I wrote it based on a facebook chat me and friend had

8:21am

Terence

?

first 
how did the paegent go?

8:22am

Rita

great! I won!

I wish you can have been there !

8:22am

Terence

i knew you would!!
sweet

congrats!!

i wish i could have too

8:22am

Rita

thanks!

8:22am

Terence

maybe when u win next year too i'll be there

lol

so what is this project?

8:23am

Rita

No.... i can only do it once

and Idk... I gotta keep the ball rolling now uuh

I guess i need to go ahead and write a movie

8:27am

Terence

yup

i'll help

u just gotta take the first step

8:28am

Rita

what that

So from this I wrote a poem called c=Conversation with God. The encouragement my friend gave me in this chat sounded like something God would say to me. I just changed some sentences around to fit better.


Conversation with God

So you won! I just wanted to say congrats sweetie!

Thanks! I wish you could have see me.


Now you know I didn't miss it. And when you win next year I'll be there too.

No.... I can only do it once.


Says who, don't you know I will make a winner over many things.

Well I guess I have to keep the ball rolling now huh?


Yup, so what is your next project,

Idk, I guess ill write the rest of my life story


Ill help you just have to take the next step.

And what is that....?



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